Dear Student,
The deadline date for Task A, B, C is FRIDAY 6TH NOVEMBER 2009 by 4PM.
The deadline date for Tasks D & E is Wednesday 6th January 2010 by 4pm.
Hard copies should be handed in or posted. It is advisable to send your work via recorded delivery.
Due to postal issues, please send me electronic copies (via email attachment) as well. In this instance, if we only receive electronic copies of your work you will not be penalised.
Please do not hesitate to contact me or your advisor should you have any queries.
Kind Regards
Avni Shah
Work Based Learning Administrator (School of Arts & Education)
Cat Hill Campus
Barnet
Herts
EN4 8HT
020 8411 4129
a.shah@mdx.ac.uk
PS: Print this email only if necessary - Think Green
Tuesday, 3 November 2009
Monday, 2 November 2009
FEEDBACK 5 ON BLOG
FEEDBACK 5 ON BLOG
Amal Salim: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. good pictures and fluid motion of a blog – lots of colour – personal and professional – bibliographies a nice touch
1. CV – yes – media/digital makes sense
2. Top 5 resources –yes – links work as well
3. 3 people you admire – yes - effective
4. links of interest – yes digital painting
B. My Teachers no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle no, not up yet
Murat Shevrat: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. incomplete? Good start need to finish
1. CV- yes
2. Top 5 resources - yes
3. 3 people you admire – yes – Tina works well – all over the top but that gives a certain style to presentation
4. links of interest- ? is this here -
B. My Teachers no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle– no - Kolb workshop up but need OWN Kolb cycle experience
Alys Spencer: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. complete and flows like a blog – personal and professional elements
1. CV- yes
2. Top 5 resources- yes
3. 3 people you admire- yes
4. links of interest – yes
B. My Teachers yes- drafts sent in
C. Kolb cycle – yes good
Donna Wilkinson: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. looks like a lot of work went into this presentation
1. CV- acting – professional - + summaries (these work well) longer bullets run together a bit + photos
2. Top 5 resources- yes
3. 3 people you admire – yes – a lot there
4. links of interest- yes music – with video links to performances
B. My Teachers no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle no, not up yet
Amal Salim: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. good pictures and fluid motion of a blog – lots of colour – personal and professional – bibliographies a nice touch
1. CV – yes – media/digital makes sense
2. Top 5 resources –yes – links work as well
3. 3 people you admire – yes - effective
4. links of interest – yes digital painting
B. My Teachers no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle no, not up yet
Murat Shevrat: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. incomplete? Good start need to finish
1. CV- yes
2. Top 5 resources - yes
3. 3 people you admire – yes – Tina works well – all over the top but that gives a certain style to presentation
4. links of interest- ? is this here -
B. My Teachers no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle– no - Kolb workshop up but need OWN Kolb cycle experience
Alys Spencer: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. complete and flows like a blog – personal and professional elements
1. CV- yes
2. Top 5 resources- yes
3. 3 people you admire- yes
4. links of interest – yes
B. My Teachers yes- drafts sent in
C. Kolb cycle – yes good
Donna Wilkinson: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. looks like a lot of work went into this presentation
1. CV- acting – professional - + summaries (these work well) longer bullets run together a bit + photos
2. Top 5 resources- yes
3. 3 people you admire – yes – a lot there
4. links of interest- yes music – with video links to performances
B. My Teachers no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle no, not up yet
FEEDBACK 4 ON BLOG
FEEDBACK 4 ON BLOG
Joseph Pegram: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. Looks good – 2 more short entries on admired people
1. CV- yes – written in conversational style in text – works well for Blog
2. Top 5 resources – yes described well
3. 3 people you admire – yes well described… but is there only 1? Andy Blankenbuehler
4. links of interest -
B. My Teachers – no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle- no, not up yet
Rosea Pickering: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. good description and appearance on web
1. CV-yes – looks like it was done for a professional audience
2. Top 5 resources – yes - descriptions
3. 3 people you admire- yes - descriptions
4. links of interest - yes- descriptions
B. My Teachers – no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle– no - Kolb workshop up but need OWN Kolb cycle experience
Laura Quin: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. complete
1. CV – yes – professional entries – maybe break up a bit on the blog for readability
2. Top 5 resources – yes – descriptions helpful
3. 3 people you admire – yes – lots there! Written in blocks – longish but work as units
4. links of interest - yes
B. My Teachers– no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle- no, not up yet
Joseph Pegram: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. Looks good – 2 more short entries on admired people
1. CV- yes – written in conversational style in text – works well for Blog
2. Top 5 resources – yes described well
3. 3 people you admire – yes well described… but is there only 1? Andy Blankenbuehler
4. links of interest -
B. My Teachers – no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle- no, not up yet
Rosea Pickering: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. good description and appearance on web
1. CV-yes – looks like it was done for a professional audience
2. Top 5 resources – yes - descriptions
3. 3 people you admire- yes - descriptions
4. links of interest - yes- descriptions
B. My Teachers – no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle– no - Kolb workshop up but need OWN Kolb cycle experience
Laura Quin: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. complete
1. CV – yes – professional entries – maybe break up a bit on the blog for readability
2. Top 5 resources – yes – descriptions helpful
3. 3 people you admire – yes – lots there! Written in blocks – longish but work as units
4. links of interest - yes
B. My Teachers– no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle- no, not up yet
FEEDBACK 3 ON BLOG
FEEDBACK 3 ON BLOG
Zoe Kennedy Feedback on Tasks A,B C: NEEDS TO HAVE A BLOG – seeing Paula 2/11/09
A.
1. CV
2. Top 5 resources
3. 3 people you admire
4. links of interest
B. My Teachers
C. Kolb cycle
Klara Kalelage Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. incomplete A what you have is ok – need to complete Tasks
1. CV- yes – what positions and job roles are you using the CV for?
2. Top 5 resources – no not up yet
3. 3 people you admire– no not up yet
4. links of interest – personal statement
B. My Teachers– no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle– no, not up yet
Danyle Morris: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A.
1. CV – yes – what job are you looking for – experience sestion tell s a bit more – maybe put this first – What future work would you like your Blog CV to talk about…
2. Top 5 resources- yes with helpful descriptions
3. 3 people you admire - no , not up yet
4. links of interest – yes
B. My Teachers – no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle – no - Kolb workshop up but need OWN Kolb cycle experience
Nancy Osbaldston: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A.
1. CV – yes –professional work to the fore to clear work identity
2. Top 5 resources – yes – described
3. 3 people you admire - yes lots of description and analysis
4. links of interest – more? A short paragraph (3 sentences)
B. My Teachers – no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle- no, not up yet
Zoe Kennedy Feedback on Tasks A,B C: NEEDS TO HAVE A BLOG – seeing Paula 2/11/09
A.
1. CV
2. Top 5 resources
3. 3 people you admire
4. links of interest
B. My Teachers
C. Kolb cycle
Klara Kalelage Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. incomplete A what you have is ok – need to complete Tasks
1. CV- yes – what positions and job roles are you using the CV for?
2. Top 5 resources – no not up yet
3. 3 people you admire– no not up yet
4. links of interest – personal statement
B. My Teachers– no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle– no, not up yet
Danyle Morris: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A.
1. CV – yes – what job are you looking for – experience sestion tell s a bit more – maybe put this first – What future work would you like your Blog CV to talk about…
2. Top 5 resources- yes with helpful descriptions
3. 3 people you admire - no , not up yet
4. links of interest – yes
B. My Teachers – no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle – no - Kolb workshop up but need OWN Kolb cycle experience
Nancy Osbaldston: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A.
1. CV – yes –professional work to the fore to clear work identity
2. Top 5 resources – yes – described
3. 3 people you admire - yes lots of description and analysis
4. links of interest – more? A short paragraph (3 sentences)
B. My Teachers – no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle- no, not up yet
FEEDBACK 2 ON BLOG
FEEDBACK 2 ON BLOG
Amanda Doyle Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. incomplete for Task A
1. CV – yes – straightforward easy to read
2. Top 5 resources –yes good – maybe a bit of explanation?
3. 3 people you admire - no
4. links of interest - no
B. My Teachers – no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle – no, not up on Blog
Stephanie Dye: Feedback on Tasks A,B C: need to complete – good start but… need to do by this week.
A. Incomplete
1. CV- no
2. Top 5 resources - no
3. 3 people you admire - no
4. links of interest – there is one entry about Chickenshed its this your interest?
B. My Teachers – no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle - no, not up on Blog
Michael Gavas Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. incomplete
1. CV - no
2. Top 5 resources - no
3. 3 people you admire- no
4. links of interest entry about getting to know you – needs more
B. My Teachers– no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle- no, not up on Blog
Laura-Beth Hill Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. good descriptions
1. CV – yes maybe a statement of purpose?
2. Top 5 resources - yes
3. 3 people you admire – yes – loads and interesting
4. links of interest - yes
B. My Teachers – yes draft done
C. Kolb cycle – needs to be posted on Blog
Amanda Doyle Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. incomplete for Task A
1. CV – yes – straightforward easy to read
2. Top 5 resources –yes good – maybe a bit of explanation?
3. 3 people you admire - no
4. links of interest - no
B. My Teachers – no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle – no, not up on Blog
Stephanie Dye: Feedback on Tasks A,B C: need to complete – good start but… need to do by this week.
A. Incomplete
1. CV- no
2. Top 5 resources - no
3. 3 people you admire - no
4. links of interest – there is one entry about Chickenshed its this your interest?
B. My Teachers – no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle - no, not up on Blog
Michael Gavas Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. incomplete
1. CV - no
2. Top 5 resources - no
3. 3 people you admire- no
4. links of interest entry about getting to know you – needs more
B. My Teachers– no, have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle- no, not up on Blog
Laura-Beth Hill Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. good descriptions
1. CV – yes maybe a statement of purpose?
2. Top 5 resources - yes
3. 3 people you admire – yes – loads and interesting
4. links of interest - yes
B. My Teachers – yes draft done
C. Kolb cycle – needs to be posted on Blog
Feedback 1
Lauren Cambridge : Feedback on Tasks A,B C
A. CV Looking at the other CVs on the blogs - would you change anything? For example - professionals might put their working experience and/or performance information first...
Your 3 people you admire are ok... links of interest are they the photos you sent? - but what do they mean to you? Where are the top 5 resources?
B. I do not have your My Teachers Task B in draft form.
C. I could not open Task C - Kolb need to send in .doc + put on Blog – don’t have Blog address yet
Ellie Connoly: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A.1. yes CV yes ok, what professional work are you looking for? you have a number of different skills… maybe clarify the Personal statement a bit more to show this.
2. 5 top resources yes good – maybe give links to these on your blog,
3. 3 people you admire – yes lots of analysis here, your links on interest
4. Your links of interest? yes Other entries interesting to see.
B. MyTeachers – no have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle – not up on Blog
Sarah Connoly Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. all well described
1. CV yes
2. Top 5 resources yes
3. 3 people you admire yes
4. links of interest yes interesting
B. My Teachers – no have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle – yes good descriptions – would inserting the different stages of the Kolb Cycle make it easier to see how the descriptions fit in with the 4 stages
Laura Davitt Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. good well described
1. CV – yes – maybe a personal statement to bring information together?
2. Top 5 resources – yes – well explained
3. 3 people you admire - yes
4. links of interest - yes
B. My Teachers– no have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle – had campus session BUT NEED OWN kolb cycle – one of your experiences
A. CV Looking at the other CVs on the blogs - would you change anything? For example - professionals might put their working experience and/or performance information first...
Your 3 people you admire are ok... links of interest are they the photos you sent? - but what do they mean to you? Where are the top 5 resources?
B. I do not have your My Teachers Task B in draft form.
C. I could not open Task C - Kolb need to send in .doc + put on Blog – don’t have Blog address yet
Ellie Connoly: Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A.1. yes CV yes ok, what professional work are you looking for? you have a number of different skills… maybe clarify the Personal statement a bit more to show this.
2. 5 top resources yes good – maybe give links to these on your blog,
3. 3 people you admire – yes lots of analysis here, your links on interest
4. Your links of interest? yes Other entries interesting to see.
B. MyTeachers – no have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle – not up on Blog
Sarah Connoly Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. all well described
1. CV yes
2. Top 5 resources yes
3. 3 people you admire yes
4. links of interest yes interesting
B. My Teachers – no have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle – yes good descriptions – would inserting the different stages of the Kolb Cycle make it easier to see how the descriptions fit in with the 4 stages
Laura Davitt Feedback on Tasks A,B C:
A. good well described
1. CV – yes – maybe a personal statement to bring information together?
2. Top 5 resources – yes – well explained
3. 3 people you admire - yes
4. links of interest - yes
B. My Teachers– no have not seen draft
C. Kolb cycle – had campus session BUT NEED OWN kolb cycle – one of your experiences
Feedback today
Please see feedback for my Advisees, if you have not had it already, on Tasks A and C on my Blog, and My Teachers via your home email... also look at Alan's , Adesola's and Peter's for their feedback as you might be albe to relatatre it to yours.
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